Morgan's Rotation response #3

I've also wondered how "organic" the natural trend is. You are doing a really good job. One sugestion I have is to put your notes in complete sentences, right now its just a little difficult to comprehend. I think I might actually read this blog when I'm not told to...

Kelsey Schwarz- Response to 4,5,6

You're doing a really good job Jeanette. I can tell that you're interested in your topic and you seem excited about it which is good. =] You're gathering good information, but the way your laying it out can be a bit confusing. The way it's written in different bullets make its a little choppy. Also just remember to write the date that you saw the article in your citations. Keep up the good work though!